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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-06-25 11:00 PM



Note Something

Notable moments
Sunrise, sunset, written thoughts
Recollect, presence

~*~

June 25, 1999…I noted, for myself, a moment.
In finding Passions in Poetry, I found myself.
I realized I did, indeed, have a voice.

Thank you, Ron, for allowing me to express my selves…

Thank you, Pipsters, for allowing me, to be, me.

June 25, 2004

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-06-25 11:07 PM


She feels like a poem
covered in pearls,
lost in a meadow
or ocean of furls.

Taken down into soft sand
by sun wind and sea,
glinted by moon light
protected by trees.

Whistled by gypsies
with dancing  bare feet,
laughed into good humor
feeling so sweet.

Listen the poem
whose cadence is rich,
pull thread through her daydream
and take the first stitch.
-------------

Hugs to you, my sis!

miscellanea
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2 posted 2004-06-26 12:59 PM


Sunshine,
  Noted!  The forum is very inviting.  I'm glad you happened upon it. You expressed your appreciation well--may I add mine to it?

           miscellanea

iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-26 02:44 AM


Happy Anniversary to PIP, Sunshine!  Sure am glad I found it, too, and wonderful new friends like you!   .....jo
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with you
4 posted 2004-06-26 03:07 AM


I for one, (among many I am sure....)
am so grateful that you are you

because you are wonderful

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-06-26 04:09 AM


ah...what a grand five years it's been!

how can I express?


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6 posted 2004-06-26 04:11 AM


happy aniversary,
so easy to have a love affair with PIP
so many of us adore these blue pages....
and we adore you too

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2004-06-26 08:11 AM


And then there was Sun.

Happy Anniversary Kari... you are so much a part of this place, and so many of us.



Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2004-06-26 08:17 AM



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9 posted 2004-06-26 08:48 AM



Congrats & Best Wishes Karilea!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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10 posted 2004-06-26 09:48 AM


You are our Sunshine,
Our Passion's Sunshine,
You make us happy,
On seas of blue,
If you should leave us
We'd not be happy
Because we all love you!!!

~ You, Dear Glorious Orb of Golden Light, have spread so much beauty, love, and wisdom with your illustrious poetry, that you are guaranteed an enviable place in Heaven when it is your time to return to your Home!

From the bottom of my heart, I thank you for all the joy that your poetry has brought to my life.

Love,
Linda xo
P.S. As I have mentioned before, you look like my paternal grandmother when she was young! This new photo IS my grandmother when she was a beautiful young woman!

Susan
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11 posted 2004-06-26 09:54 AM


I too am glad you found PIP, as I am that I as well stumbled upon the pages of blue.  You warm our hearts with the radiance of your words and heart.  

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Denise
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12 posted 2004-06-27 10:09 AM


I can relate, Karilea! Thank you for being here and for being you!
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13 posted 2004-06-27 10:13 AM


Happy Anniversary!!

Special Hugs to you Karilea for your poetry, help & kindness.

rwood
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14 posted 2004-06-27 10:33 AM


And what would poetryland be without its own special sun goddess? It's like everyday is a sun day with you around. Thank you for sharing the art of you.

Love,
Reg

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15 posted 2004-06-27 11:24 AM


Okay Sunshine I will note that I love this poem! (Wink!) Bravo my friend.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Bonnie j
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16 posted 2004-06-27 11:35 AM


It was in the year of Oct. 2001 that I found a voice I wanted to share. Words hidden from me that I did not know that one day they would surface and say hello to the world.
I would notice things with my eyes and wish I able to paint. Then I found this canvas of white then another the color of blue and now I paint with words the color of the rainbow.
Even as I write this...I'm thinking how can I change this into a poem.
I enjoy your poems Sunshine even though I do not say much. I do love to read you. You are soothing and  a comfort with your soft gentle words with your smile that is filled with your name Sunshine.
Have a great day
BonBon


Ericc
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17 posted 2004-06-27 12:36 PM


And thank you...for simply being you...and expressing yourself so grandly.

Eric

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18 posted 2004-06-27 05:12 PM


Hey Sunshineygirl..Happy Anniversary! Wow.. 5 years huh? I'm so glad to know you Bella.

p.s sorry I'm late.



Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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19 posted 2004-06-27 05:38 PM


enjoyed
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20 posted 2004-06-27 05:56 PM


What wonderful notes you always gift us!
TD

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