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What It Is That Remains
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What It Is That Remains |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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What It Is That Remains please do not tell me how I think and feel maybe for you it was over after the thrill but I find myself standing beneath darkness’s light and in aching breath pushed against too tight when does salt dissolve after each tear’s turn there was a sacrifice ignited where I still burn match heart a fire was lit what now remains is just me consumed no ash, just pain’s flames "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when does salt dissolve after each tear’s turn there was a sacrifice ignited where I still burn match heart a fire was lit what now remains is just me consumed no ash, just pain’s flames ============================ oh my.......... youve just written a moth anthem......... *library* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ouch.  My thoughts are with you. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
painful poetry here - you paint a vivid picture of how powerfully fires can burn - Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just a reminder: I got your back |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my....this aches! Excellent write Helen. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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