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The Ride
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The Ride |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Ride Rode an echo slammed in a wall Caught in the fall bounced like a ball Down a mountain spilled a fountain Started to spin and do it again. I challenge the echoes repeat The gravity of its receipt The power of its grace and rhyme Impressions in the sands of time I know that echoes will grow gray It cannot change the changing way They live within a moments stir Perhaps the ones that you prefer They form the very link of seem They are the lace within a dream They are the rue or grace of style They are the Fulsome of your wile Echoes are a favors wave A remnant of the knave or brave |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I challenge the echoes repeat The gravity of its receipt The power of its grace and rhyme Impressions in the sands of time ==================================== and that will be the coolest verse I read today!!! I adore the brilliance in the intend of those first two lines of it.... sometimes I wonder if ya really know just how groovy you are.  Your rhymes will echo off these walls for as long as this moth has breath, winkies, and fingers to type  *ww*    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My Dear Sweet Sonneteering Angel Man ~ There be power, grace and rhyme in the echo of thy poetry and thy mots live beyond a moments stir in the hearts of thy avid readers! Angel blessings, EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I enjoyed the ride very much.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wheeeeee....I have a whole week of Sy'ing to catch up on!!!! Happy Dance!!!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I challenge the echoes repeat The gravity of its receipt The power of its grace and rhyme Impressions in the sands of time" yep...gonna have to echo Janet here...these are the coolest lines.... really enjoyed this |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Your words echo through the universe and touch us all, Sy Man. Cool write. ~K~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A very skillful blend of image word and rhyme. Thanks!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write here m'friend. Seems I just squeezed in just under the wire.. it's almost lunch time...but there's still tea. ~Noontime Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You always pick the choice. WWRS Earth Angel How does one top an Angel? Susan Thank you sweet. Sunshine Welcome home sweety. SEA You are a dear. Kahlil Thank you for the cool. icebox Thank you for the comp. Nancy Tea will be fine, hugs. passing Thank you for the wonderful. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I know that echoes will grow gray It cannot change the changing way They live within a moments stir Perhaps the ones that you prefer" Words so true -- enjoyed immensely! ..jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana You are a joy. |
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