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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-06-24 07:19 PM

I’m overwrought by indecisiveness,
Truly sickened to the thick of my heart,
And I wish I had the words to express,
What you’ve incidentally ripped apart.

I can not believe the absurdities,
Thou hast affirmed with thy sly serpents’ tongue,
O’ methinks naught of your priorities,
O’ methinks naught of the songs that you’ve sung.

Expunge thy monogram from the roster,
Yea cast your spurious focus elsewhere,
‘Tis plain well-being thee would not foster,
And you raise naught but castles in the air.
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.
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For better or worse, yea love is oft blind,
But even the sightless need peace of mind

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-24 07:23 PM

Excellent write Kevin!
You have been missed...hope you're back to stay awhile.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2004-06-24 10:04 PM

Another keeper in my folder.
Love it.

:-)

Ribbits and Ribbits

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2004-06-25 12:43 PM

i'm not even worthy enough to read this ...

thank you ... i was so missing your very good POETRY!

bravo... bravo !!

hugs,
S~

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-06-25 12:46 PM

Very strong poem but I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-25 01:00 AM

"For better or worse, yea love is oft blind,
But even the sightless need peace of mind"

Oh, bravo, bravo -- great lines!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-06-25 04:53 AM

ouch

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-06-25 06:45 AM

Yes, it is a keeper. Your writing is brilliant with a refreshing edge. I will enjoy reading your posts.

Warm regards,

Kevin

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