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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2004-06-24 04:26 PM


I heard my name moan
softly between your lips
with heart racing urgency,
& unquenchable fire
an exhalation of intoxicating
sweetness drenched in desire
I heard my name
torn from the depths of
you just like this
here I am, my love
waiting
here I wait, my love
wanting

did you not call?

I am here...

~tier

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-06-24 04:27 PM


So beautiful Tier...love the feelings here.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-06-25 10:29 AM


lovely!!!!!!

good morning

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
3 posted 2004-06-25 11:36 AM


Tier, you capture so well that feeling of anticipation -- lovely poem.   .....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-25 02:11 PM


sometimes the wait is painful
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2004-06-26 07:54 PM


The waiting and the wanting is a long time coming,
but I've heard it's worth it.  

Love the way you write, Tiersdin~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2004-06-26 09:16 PM



"It" is right...

well done, Tier...

Ericc
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7 posted 2004-06-27 12:41 PM


Wow...!!!!

Eric

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