Say It - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #32

Say It

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2004-06-24 04:26 PM

I heard my name moan
softly between your lips
with heart racing urgency,
& unquenchable fire
an exhalation of intoxicating
sweetness drenched in desire
I heard my name
torn from the depths of
you just like this
here I am, my love
waiting
here I wait, my love
wanting

did you not call?

I am here...

~tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-24 04:27 PM

So beautiful Tier...love the feelings here.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-06-25 10:29 AM

lovely!!!!!!

good morning

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-25 11:36 AM

Tier, you capture so well that feeling of anticipation -- lovely poem.

.....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-06-25 02:11 PM

sometimes the wait is painful

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-06-26 07:54 PM

The waiting and the wanting is a long time coming,
but I've heard it's worth it.

Love the way you write, Tiersdin~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-06-26 09:16 PM

"It" is right...

well done, Tier...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-06-27 12:41 PM

Wow...!!!!

Eric

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.