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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
he's a smooth dancer sway 'er to 'n fro never miss a beat on the oak boards, dontcha know ruffle shuffle she shy carry 'er away Ruby shoes'a two step when she hears the music play |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sounds like a place that one would enjoy visiting board creak songs when the steppin' gets jiggy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil If we listen we can hear the same beat. Enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, K! What a delightful, upbeat poem. You captured the essence of freedom and joy in this wonderful vignette! Sounds like your spirits are flying high, my friend! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wonderful write..kinda like a "soft shoe" flow with a quiet peaceful rhythm.....I enjoyed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loved this toe-tapper!  Hus~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very much enjoyed, the motion, rhythm, the sound of the words!  .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Rock and roll, hoochy cool!!!!  This was so much fun to read, Kahlil~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah shucks...EA took my words...  Enjoyed, Kahlil... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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