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the end of dew
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the end of dew |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the willowy wisps of the avant-garde deface the well-worn air in panted breath with tendril touch in psalms of rest by adorant praise to fresh-lanced dew glistening coats of pearlized drops, nature’s nectar in amethyst arrays nestled calmly upon stately sprays waiting for dawnings’ yawns to drink it deeply to return it abruptly |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You painted a pretty picture with your words  Pepper |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rich in language, rich in visuals!  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all I can think to say is "wow" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
To create with another a relationship outside and beyond the confines of what was known...that is a dream to be made reality! Loved this, TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Steavenr -- outstanding and I loved the imagery....really wonderful write. The end --- took me by surprise. ....jo |
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