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Open Poetry #32
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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-06-24 01:39 AM


the willowy wisps of the avant-garde
deface the well-worn air in panted breath
with tendril touch in psalms of rest
by adorant praise to fresh-lanced dew

glistening coats of pearlized drops,
nature’s nectar in amethyst arrays
nestled calmly upon stately sprays
waiting for dawnings’ yawns

to drink it deeply
to return it abruptly


© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
peppermint35
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1 posted 2004-06-24 01:55 AM


You painted a pretty picture with your words

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-06-24 01:58 AM


Rich in language, rich in visuals!


EA

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-06-24 02:53 AM


all I can think to say is "wow"
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2004-06-24 01:32 PM


To create with another a relationship outside and beyond the confines of what was known...that is a dream to be made reality!
Loved this,
TD

iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-25 12:24 PM


Steavenr -- outstanding and I loved the imagery....really wonderful write.  The end --- took me by surprise.   ....jo
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