Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2004-06-23
07:22 AM
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I sail the Night
I touch the magic Braille of night Those dazzling stars of wonders light They whisper in my soul of time And shows the past in goals of mime
It changes fantasy to true By repetition in review It drains forever in its wend And brings all time unto an end
For time is made of moment’s dew That dries within each passing coup And opens up an hour’s door To see the flowers evermore
I see them in the passing light They are a chilling awesome sight Each one a star of magic brew Each one is changed to something new.
It sets my heart aflame to see The mime in time of you and me
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Seymour Tabin
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2004-06-23
07:49 AM
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Ahhh Sy, this was my first read of the morning, and a magnificant one I might add, thank you dear friend and poet for your very star felt words. A very nice way to look at things.
Hugs...and smiles, Lee J. Good good morning
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Janet Marie
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2004-06-23
07:57 AM
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I touch the magic Braille of night Those dazzling stars of wonders light They whisper in my soul of time And shows the past in goals of mime
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and somewhere in my southern sky there is a star that I've named Sy.
Good Morning me sweet Sy-guy. I'm having my morning tea and banana bread with a side of your rhymes divine.
*winkiewinkie*
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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
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2004-06-23
08:03 AM
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Just beautiful Seymour and very much enjoyed dear friend, thanks for sharing.
Sincerely Rick
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
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2004-06-23
08:38 AM
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Beautiful morning read Sy! Makes this wonderful summer morning even more breathtaking. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near. When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back
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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
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2004-06-23
09:48 AM
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Each one is changed to something new.
It sets my heart aflame to see The mime in time of you and me
Just beautiful Sy~ You are such a delight to read.
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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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2004-06-23
09:52 AM
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Sy, What a way to end my morning time on here! I fall into dreams when I read your poetry. It is so relaxing and musical.
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
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2004-06-23
09:54 AM
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Good morning, m'dear Sonneteer!
I am sending you an awesome bouquet of star flowers this fine summer's day.
There is magic in your writing. EA
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
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2004-06-23
12:59 PM
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good afternoon Sy
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2004-06-23
02:07 PM
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LeeJ, Good morning and thank you sweet.
JM, Then the star gives you a winkie twinkie. Stay well and know that I adore you.
Rick, Thank you for the read and comment.
BluesSerenade, Your answer serenades me.
Sadelite You are a dear.
Earth Angel, There is magic in your answers. passing, Good afternoon sweety
Nancy. You are a love. hugs
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