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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-06-23 07:22 AM


I sail the Night

I touch the magic Braille of night
Those dazzling stars of wonders light
They whisper in my soul of time
And shows the past in goals of mime

It changes fantasy to true
By repetition in review
It drains forever in its wend
And brings all time unto an end

For time is made of moment’s dew
That dries within each passing coup
And opens up an hour’s door
To see the flowers evermore

I see them in the passing light
They are a chilling awesome sight
Each one a star of magic brew
Each one is changed to something new.

It sets my heart aflame to see
The mime in time of you and me

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-06-23 07:49 AM


Ahhh Sy, this was my first read of the morning, and a magnificant one I might add, thank you dear friend and poet for your very star felt words.  A very nice way to look at things.  

Hugs...and smiles, Lee J.  Good good morning

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-06-23 07:57 AM


I touch the magic Braille of night
Those dazzling stars of wonders light
They whisper in my soul of time
And shows the past in goals of mime


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and somewhere in my southern sky
there is a star that I've named Sy.



Good Morning me sweet Sy-guy.
I'm having my morning tea and banana bread with a side of your rhymes divine.

*winkiewinkie*


Rick
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3 posted 2004-06-23 08:03 AM


Just beautiful Seymour and very much enjoyed dear friend, thanks for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-06-23 08:38 AM


Beautiful morning read Sy!
Makes this wonderful summer morning even more breathtaking.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2004-06-23 09:48 AM


Each one is changed to something new.

It sets my heart aflame to see
The mime in time of you and me

Just beautiful Sy~
You are such a delight to read.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-06-23 09:52 AM


Sy,
   What a way to end my morning time on here!
I fall into dreams when I read your poetry.  It is so relaxing and musical.
                    

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2004-06-23 09:54 AM


Good morning, m'dear Sonneteer!

I am sending you an awesome bouquet of star flowers this fine summer's day.
StarsFlowersStars
There is magic in your writing.

EA


passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-06-23 12:59 PM


good afternoon Sy
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-06-23 02:07 PM


LeeJ,
Good morning and thank you sweet.

JM,
Then the star gives you a winkie twinkie.
Stay well and know that I adore you.


Rick,
Thank you for the read and comment.

BluesSerenade,
Your answer serenades me.

Sadelite
You are a dear.

Earth Angel,
There is magic in your answers.

passing,
Good afternoon sweety  

Nancy.
You are a love. hugs

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