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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-06-21 10:51 AM

You are the falling...

As rain that strives to
feed the earth.

And caught within this
sudden storm.

I lie drenched beneath your
touch.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-06-21 11:27 AM

this is so powerful....well done Ericc

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-21 11:35 AM

Your best! Has to be Eric!
This is exquisite!!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-21 12:33 PM

whew!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2004-06-21 02:28 PM

Wonderful. Has that been said yet?

Sandra

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

5 posted 2004-06-21 02:37 PM

I love this! You said so much in so few words. Wow.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-06-21 02:54 PM

Triple "Whoa!"

Sounds like all your thirsts were quenched!

Linda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-06-21 03:03 PM

Oh yes, par excellence, as always. Mmmm, mmm.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-06-21 04:43 PM

These inspirations come in waves unstoppable.
Wonderful!!
TD

time prophet
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

9 posted 2004-06-21 06:32 PM

Much said with few words, well done.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2004-06-21 07:28 PM

Hello Eric

Your words took my breath away. Absolutely exquisite!

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2004-06-21 07:33 PM

Ericc

I am amazed that you continue to find completely new ways to write love.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2004-06-21 09:57 PM

Another really beautiful poem to add to my collection of you -- so beautiful!

...........jo

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

13 posted 2004-06-22 06:24 PM

Eric,
love the way you evoke emotion with so few words...

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

14 posted 2004-06-23 09:47 AM

Ooh....eyes going green.... I wish I'd written this!

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

15 posted 2004-06-23 11:43 AM

Always a pleasure to read your words, Eric...

~tier

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

16 posted 2004-06-23 12:12 PM

i enjoyed this very much

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

17 posted 2004-06-23 01:38 PM

Outstandingly powerful and perfect!!

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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