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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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(For my muse.) Sleepless night. Dim light lingers while I write. Rain pours. Closed doors. Sit here listening. Paper blue Me, too, pondering your words. You, me words free I hear, but cannot speak. Tongue tied, I hide behind imagination. Rainy night shadow write is this you or is it me? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ Yes! I do so understand where you are coming from ~ and I feel as tho' I'm write, I mean "right", there with you!  Now you, Karen and I really should get some shut-eye! lol  Dream sweet! Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Okay, how can I say no to an Angel!  and thanks for reading. ......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this touches me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
between muse and you rainy nights pour poetry thru and thru |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautifully written, Jo. ~tier  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the connection between poet and muse, yes indeed. Very nicely done Jo. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Blue....such a cold color....but it's also the color of warm Pacific waters, of a sunny sky, of the haze over the Ozark hills.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Yep, I know this place, and night, and conversation. Well said! Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely Jo... Such a lingering rhythm..much enjoyed. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Who knows how it all comes together, the muse and the writer? It's mysterious, that's for certain, but one thing is for sure, a muse loves atmosphere (like rainy nights)! Corinne |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, How well I understand. Nice writing, btw! Going to pick up a big rug of a pup tomorrow. (I'm "thinking" about borrowing daughter's preowned vehicle and lug this big watch-pup down to meet you and your muse. If so, you'll have to get out all those old poems so we can root through them!) luv ya,Sis Sadelite |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
so you say the things we all feel and experience so very well here - if you figure out the answer write another to tell us - loved it - Paul |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this. Thoughtful. Can feel the atmosphere, the late night, hear the rain, and the whispering of the muse. Much enjoyed. Hugs -- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Poets all, I can hardly believe so many sweet responses to my meandering. You are all so kind. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and post. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Both. *S* I like this very much, my friend! *S* |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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