Open Poetry #32 |
feeling the thinking way |
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I stand accused Of thinking too much Shirking emotion Shrinking from touch But I am not guilty Of shirking at all Sometimes analytical Sometimes withdrawn But love the touch sensation Love being so close Intimacy beckons I run all the way Not just physical touch But mind and hearts too A soul thrown in offers So much for the stew So accuse me of thinking I do that yes I do And not always feeling The same as another might do But I care for the many Who struggle and wait For closeness with someone Especially their mate |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"But love the touch sensation Love being so close Intimacy beckons I run all the way Not just physical touch But mind and hearts too A soul thrown in offers So much for the stew" ~ Now that is one fine recipe for love! Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul, thanks for sharing this side of you. Enjoyed the poem very much! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul "Not just physical touch But mind and hearts too A soul thrown in offers So much for the stew So accuse me of thinking I do that yes I do" Yep, you are a special man! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful insight to this side of you Paul... Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Paul, This is absolutely wonderful. It describes how I pictured you-a person who gives his all. May I keep this one? Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write I totally understand |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's a hard balance to hit, isn't it? I used to think too much and feel almost nothing....now I feel too much and I have to admit that there are occasions when I think almost nothing...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
good write |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Good message in this one, nice things to think about indeed. Thanks for sharing. Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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