Through the Endless Emerald Seas

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Open Poetry #32

Through the Endless Emerald Seas

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19

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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-21 05:58 PM

Through the Endless Emerald Seas

i see endless seas in your eyes,
the tide ever-changing,
a whirlpool of emerald waves
crashing amongst your hidden storms,
thundering its bohemian cry.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2004-06-22 07:35 AM

Beautiful imagery in this!
The eyes are definitely a window to the soul...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-06-22 08:24 AM

oh let the spirit rise to a source and sense of being, most miraculous...
splendid read

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-22 12:49 PM

nicely done

so vivid in its imagery

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-06-22 01:34 PM

Lovely imagery...very nicely penned.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-07-02 10:35 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-07-03 12:54 PM

He sounds like a poet to me! hehehe -- great description.....jo

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2004-07-05 02:30 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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