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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 2004-06-21 05:58 PM



Through the Endless Emerald Seas


i see endless seas in your eyes,
the tide ever-changing,
a whirlpool of emerald waves
crashing amongst your hidden storms,
thundering its bohemian cry.



© Copyright 2004 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
GG
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2004-06-22 07:35 AM


Beautiful imagery in this!
The eyes are definitely a window to the soul...


Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-06-22 08:24 AM


oh let the spirit rise to a source and sense of being, most miraculous...
splendid read

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-06-22 12:49 PM


nicely done

so vivid in its imagery

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-06-22 01:34 PM


Lovely imagery...very nicely penned.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-07-02 10:35 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
iliana
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6 posted 2004-07-03 12:54 PM


He sounds like a poet to me! hehehe -- great description.....jo
Tequilia_Sunrise
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7 posted 2004-07-05 02:30 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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