Open Poetry #32 |
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Forever Spring |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Forever Spring I dream upon forever’s spring Abeam the theme of pleasures ring A ride upon a flying dove To find forever’s face of love I seek a shoals white sand of peace The fantasy of weavers lease To sail the ship of harmony Beyond the winds of tyranny To bide a ride of ecstasy Out side the storms of agony To rest upon a field of green Within my arms my loving queen Across the mote of egos deep Success is but a mental leap A journey on forever’s plain The passage o’er the river vain And I am ready for the run Before the setting of the sun |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I am sure the sailing will be sweeter with your lady Fine poem Gloom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir T.! I'd say that you have a lot of "run" in you before the setting of your sun! ![]() This was so lovely ~ and the "field of green" seems so serene and peaceful... ~ May your days ~ and nights! ~ be "Forever Spring"! Lovin' hugs, EA ![]() |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful images in this poem Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Sy! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A pleasure to read...beautiful. Eric |
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EbonyRose New Member
since 2004-06-19
Posts 1 |
Good morning, Seymour This is very lovely, enjoyed so much. Thank you, EbonyRose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this, as always, classic Sy, perfect ending |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your spring doth overflow with words of dreams and things that bear new fruit with each read. ![]() Sincerely, Reg |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Across the mote of egos deep Success is but a mental leap A journey on forever’s plain The passage o’er the river vain And I am ready for the run Before the setting of the sun." WOW, what can be said about this lovely?! No sufficient words, sorry. Just ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Me thinks that spring is forever in your heart and smart! ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy's the Guy! Ya' know you make words roll off a tongue like... like... Oh heck how do I know? I just know it's cool! ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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