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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This...will never come again. Yes we may meet familiar in the distance of tomorrow. Yet this... This perfect taste of shared moments passing sweet against the lips. This... The breath falling in singular union of our met desires. This... Our fingers trailing to the final curve of every pleasure offered. This...stands alone in the briefness of its passage. And once gone...this...will never come again. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You are so exceptional in writing "this". Beautiful.  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc True and a good write, enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so very true |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc -- you've done it again! And, you are right!  ....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exactly my point! You know I really love the way you write. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes we may meet familiar in the distance of tomorrow. ~*~ Oh, yes. Every moment is individual in its own right. Every connection is individual in its own meeting. Smiling here... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The amazing thing is when you can recognize that it will not come again, while it is happening. This is exquisite, Ericc. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
THIS is excellent!! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And...this is beautiful!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric Once again your words speak volumes. Sensuality and love flowed through each and every word. I thought you might like this, although not written by me. "Wine comes in at the mouth and love comes in at the eye. That's all we know for truth before we grow old and die. I lift the glass to my mouth, I look at you, and I sigh" Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Eric, Another beauty! They just keep rolling out! Sadelite |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Eric I just had to read "this" again. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It will never come again....but it will always be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You always seem to make such perfect, sorrowful sense, but i'm still always smiling reading it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And yet... it is never lost. *S* Beautiful!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"This... The breath falling in singular union of our met desires. This... Our fingers trailing to the final curve of every pleasure offered." whew..... you are unbeatable in the *sigh* department.... |
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