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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-18 12:06 PM


There are stains
Grown slowly on these fingers
Filled with pain
Of the years,
The discoloring lingers,
Yet the tears
Cleansing not
Wept over from sobbing face
The thoughts brought,
Just moaning
From the wrong time and wrong place
Entombing
So the memories remain.

Gloom


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-06-18 01:40 PM


yeah...I relate
Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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2 posted 2004-06-18 03:56 PM


Enjoyed this, though sad.  It kind of reminds my of my Goose poem and the Fisher Prince.  (Mine, not as eloquently stated, but of similar content.)   Have a good weekend,
             Sadelite

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (06-18-2004 05:22 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
3 posted 2004-06-18 03:59 PM


today i decided to stop by; i've always seen you but skipped over...
first time poster here, pleased i stopped by

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2004-06-18 08:12 PM


What of the heart weeps over to the flesh, is a pure cleansing indeed.
TD

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
5 posted 2004-06-22 11:54 AM


Yep....

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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6 posted 2004-06-22 11:56 AM


yeppers Gloom, so very true.  
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