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Martie

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0 posted 2004-06-17 06:02 PM

Finding Something to Smile About

There is a difference
in the way trees react to wind.

One is still,
looking over the roof of the house
into my open door and me within,
its branches hold grace by holding back,
with a kind of regal symmetry
it keeps its leaves intact.

The tree just behind it is moving all around
and I can feel the music of its dance
upon my own skin now.

Like a jumpy kid in line to buy a toy,
it can’t hide the excitement of air that moves in joy,
and the sound of leaves like rushing streams
is music I hold dear,
yet without the stately charm of the other
would the song be quite as clear?

When I’m losing hold of step and place, like now,
there are different ways that I find grace, it’s all around.

Mysteria

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1 posted 2004-06-17 06:06 PM

Good for you Martie! Good for you! That is what hope and faith are made of that is for sure, and if there is something good in anything you are sure to find it! Blessings to you.

icebox
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in the shadows

2 posted 2004-06-17 06:07 PM

*smile*

There are times when your words bring me back when I have traveled far.

I think I need to stand still for a while.

Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-06-17 06:57 PM

Martie
You just did the Martie twist, a delight to read.

Ericc
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4 posted 2004-06-17 07:24 PM

So true...and beautifuly
told.

Eric

Susan
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walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-06-17 07:28 PM

Mmmm, I like this. I too love the stir of wind through trees.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Ratleader

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6 posted 2004-06-17 08:17 PM

As with most of your poetry, there are layers within the layers of this poem, streams of meaning within the river of it.

Some are there for sheer beauty, sunlit ripples on the surface of your words, some are eddy currents made for reflection, and below it all there is the deeper surge that can give direction to a wayward spirit.

Thank you for all of them.

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Nightshade

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just out of reach

7 posted 2004-06-17 08:30 PM

When I’m losing hold of step and place, like now,
there are different ways that I find grace, it’s all around.

Yes Martie ! Yes. hugs dear lady, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

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8 posted 2004-06-17 08:34 PM

When I need evidence of grace, I simply look for your words. Fantastic Martie

Bonnie j
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Ohio

9 posted 2004-06-17 09:09 PM

Oh I love this one. Since I write about trees alot. With so many thoughts running in my head I never thought of their moving as in a dance.I think my Magnolia is the graceful elderly one. The Maple she is a dirty little kid who is always making a mess.
The Evergreen stands there saying to the other trees "Oh Please"!....rolling her branches towards the heavens. Now the tree in the back is always dropping her limbs cause she is so old and tired and just stands and watches the others at their play.
Good one
BonBon

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Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-06-17 09:14 PM

"When I’m losing hold of step and place, like now,
there are different ways that I find grace, it’s all around."

You most certainly do find grace to carry on dear Martie.
~Holding you close in thought and prayer~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Magnus

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11 posted 2004-06-18 09:08 PM

Sounds like a big hug is also just the right
thing about now....

jwesley
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12 posted 2004-06-18 09:10 PM

Wonderfully told Martie ... enjoyed much.

jwesley

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-06-19 05:18 AM

you make me smile

Honeybunch
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14 posted 2004-06-19 05:57 AM

Martie - this is absolutely lovely and a great inspiration!

Janet Marie
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15 posted 2004-06-19 07:48 AM

People come & go in our lives but the memories & poetry remain...
Of lessons learned, things held in respect, among them is engraved your name.

jm

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

16 posted 2004-06-19 09:08 AM

When I’m losing hold of step and place, like now,
there are different ways that I find grace, it’s all around.

~*~

Dear friend, when I need grace, or something to smile about? I come and find your poems, and all becomes good again.

iliana
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17 posted 2004-06-19 02:15 PM

I am inspired by your take on things sometimes, Martie!

Honeybee
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18 posted 2004-06-19 10:58 PM

Martie, you are the epitome of grace. I always love to look through your optimistic eyes, you are inspiring and this is awesome! I'm adding it to the lists of my favourites of yours.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

rwood
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Tennessee

19 posted 2004-06-20 10:17 PM

Many smiles here. I love trees. I think I was a tree in a past life, a weeping willow, or oak...or maybe I was just a weed dreaming of being a tree? Your words bring animation and grace, indeed.

Love,
Reg

Sadelite
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20 posted 2004-06-20 11:38 PM

Martie,
I truly enjoyed the depth of this. With such life around, there is much to smile about. I have a lot of feeling coming forward after reading this poem, but don't have the ability to share how this very special writing touches me. Thanking you,
Sadelite

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21 posted 2004-06-21 09:47 AM

Martie - you take us deeply into this and play wonderful words and images and feelings on our hearts - you and your words are grance to many - Paul

LeeJ
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22 posted 2004-06-22 08:34 AM

Martie, I am speechless

One is still,
looking over the roof of the house
into my open door and me within,
its branches hold grace by holding back,
with a kind of regal symmetry
it keeps its leaves intact.

Wish I could be more like that...your brillance shines through the words from your heart, all meld into one great composition...YOU! Lovely

Thank you for writing and sharing.

kayjay
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Oregon

23 posted 2004-06-22 09:19 AM

There is a freshness and a serenity to your phrasing that is really a unique voice.
Well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Constance
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Ohio

24 posted 2004-06-22 10:09 AM

Martie,

You know what girl? There are few places and few people in my world that I can count on to always, always make my senses soar. Your poetry is one of the places I go with absolute confidence that it won't be a wasted trip. Another winner!

Gentle Spirit
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25 posted 2004-06-22 11:16 AM

When I’m losing hold of step and place, like now,
there are different ways that I find grace, it’s all around.

Many, many smiles here Martie. Your poetry moves me, makes me think, and helps me to believe in all that is good. You are so special sweet lady.

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