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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-04 11:24 AM


I come to this chair
With little energy to spare
Falling into its grasp
Head automatically sag
Limply slumping as a worn rag
Stopping at last.
Sleep would have been good
If I’d only slept like I should
Instead of fighting dream demons
But I fought them because
There I was
And they wouldn’t listen to reason.
As my psych was raging
Till alarm was ringing
And wake was bringing
And I sat up in bed.
Awake and not rested still
Perhaps I should have taken a pill
To chase the demons from my head,
Instead,
With eyes crusted red
Dressed and went on my way
Tired
And not inspired
To greet another day
Rooted down heavily
Fallen into as deep as I possibly be
Look for the potion
To restart my motion
Yes a third cup of coffee.

Gloom


© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2004-06-04 11:41 AM


Ahh I feel completely drained by the end of this read!
I could go for some caffeine, too.
And I completely agree about the dream thing...
A couple nights ago I finally fell asleep
and immediately started dreaming.
I dreamed about being in horrible pain
with people torturing me, for an hour.
Then I woke up and realised the pain was real.
Yep, migraine.
Agh, sleep just isn't what it used to be!
Excellent writing.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-06-04 12:39 PM


Yes, a third cup of coffee breaker -- yes.  I call it my daily transfusion!  lol  -- Great poem, Gandolf!   .....jo
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-06-04 01:09 PM


it used to be third pot for me...glad I cut back or I'd probably be dead
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2004-06-22 11:43 AM


Ahhhhh....Juan was found!

Night terrors...my daughter has them.  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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