Open Poetry #32 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I come to this chair With little energy to spare Falling into its grasp Head automatically sag Limply slumping as a worn rag Stopping at last. Sleep would have been good If I’d only slept like I should Instead of fighting dream demons But I fought them because There I was And they wouldn’t listen to reason. As my psych was raging Till alarm was ringing And wake was bringing And I sat up in bed. Awake and not rested still Perhaps I should have taken a pill To chase the demons from my head, Instead, With eyes crusted red Dressed and went on my way Tired And not inspired To greet another day Rooted down heavily Fallen into as deep as I possibly be Look for the potion To restart my motion Yes a third cup of coffee. Gloom |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ahh I feel completely drained by the end of this read! I could go for some caffeine, too. And I completely agree about the dream thing... A couple nights ago I finally fell asleep and immediately started dreaming. I dreamed about being in horrible pain with people torturing me, for an hour. Then I woke up and realised the pain was real. Yep, migraine. Agh, sleep just isn't what it used to be! Excellent writing. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, a third cup of coffee breaker -- yes. I call it my daily transfusion! lol -- Great poem, Gandolf! ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it used to be third pot for me...glad I cut back or I'd probably be dead |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ahhhhh....Juan was found! Night terrors...my daughter has them. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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