Open Poetry #32 |
Arthurian |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Moments with child Motivating renaissance & round tables Beholding commencements Pulling on a savvy fabric Falling into the breath of the world With an invisible Excalibur Stretching out a right hand Satellites with better partners Soaked disciples into Champions of fairness Wild horses on course, white steeds galloping To an oasis without compass Where a home of common folks tended Moral sanctions outnumbered evil Innocent voices joined the children Rescuer of souls, working from home Which were wandering like sheep? Fashioning beauty and clandestine seals What was in sight Enduring chains drinking ascent Smiling air looks in every room Going about the business of life |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A wonderful write, enjoyed the read, good morning. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Again, Lee, you have written an excellent poem. I know that I've told you before, but you are so very talented. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I had trouble picking out which lines I liked the best.... but I've decided on the last two! ....jo |
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