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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-17 10:41 AM


Moments with child
Motivating renaissance & round tables
Beholding commencements
Pulling on a savvy fabric
Falling into the breath of the world
With an invisible Excalibur
Stretching out a right hand
Satellites with better partners
Soaked disciples into
Champions of fairness
Wild horses on course, white steeds galloping
To an oasis without compass
Where a home of common folks tended
Moral sanctions outnumbered evil
Innocent voices joined the children
Rescuer of souls, working from home
Which were wandering like sheep?
Fashioning beauty and clandestine seals
What was in sight
Enduring chains drinking ascent
Smiling air looks in every room
Going about the business of life

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-06-17 11:04 AM


LeeJ
A wonderful write, enjoyed the read, good morning.

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2 posted 2004-06-17 11:37 AM


Again, Lee, you have written an excellent poem.
I know that I've told you before, but you are so
very talented. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-18 12:22 PM


I had trouble picking out which lines I liked the best.... but I've decided on the last two!   ....jo
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