| Open Poetry #32 |
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Sigh Songs |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Anticipation loves rhapsody enticing sigh songs to be sung. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-17-2004 08:38 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, And a lovely moning to you. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
You managed to remind me of what an incredible feeling the anticipation of love is with very few words. Thank you so much for sharing this little tid-bit. It packed a heck of a punch in those couple of words. Well done. Kevin |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your use of alliteration literally gave the poem a rhapsodotic feel to it! ![]() Mornin' hug, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Liquid air surrounds Coo of mourning doves first greet Anticipation |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Donna!! I love this! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhhhh, sigh Beautiful |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
lovely Donna. enjoyed. hugs, Chris ![]() Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My friends, my thanks go out to you all.. Happy Friday! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
haiku erotics short skirt with wind lift whispers blind man hears the silk lovely edges ms |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
DS~ only you-yep only you... ![]() thanks for the blow by sigh and smile...*kotc* Vandana thanks so much good to see you. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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