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Open Poetry #32

senyru

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-06-16 11:59 AM

strumming reeds dancing
to the chorus of the breeze
hip-hop waltz,schmaltzy

©June 16, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-06-16 12:11 PM

I enjoyed this bit of senryuic schmaltz!

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

2 posted 2004-06-16 02:19 PM

It makes me laugh! I can't write these no matter how hard I try but I love them.

Kaz

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-16 02:22 PM

This is a treasure, VAS!

.....jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-06-16 02:35 PM

Fun -- made me smile --

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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