Open Poetry #32 |
The Birds that Sing |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Birds that Sing My answer to the birds that sing Is utter silent listening? Embracing awe that floods my core And lingers like the winds that roar. Dancing through a living goal Lancing coup within my soul Lending feed to porous soil Building roil to stay a foil It is a source of pageantry A lulling force of pleasantry A titillate of natures wild A seasoning of tasty mild It is a pillow rests my mind A sanction of the sweetest kind A puff of wind that dries the sweat The labor of a life’s beget I offer up my hand as perch A limb upon my tree of search |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You never fail to paint pretty word pictures, Sy... good morning! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dancing through a living goal Lancing coup within my soul Lending feed to porous soil Building roil to stay a foil oh Sy, what beautiful images....lovely morning song singing with the doves of morning. Smiles and hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OOOH what a lovely verse it is today! You, this verse, the weather...picture perfect Sy! Have a wonderful day! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My answer to the birds that sing Is utter silent listening? Embracing awe that floods my core And lingers like the winds that roar. ================================== It is a pillow rests my mind A sanction of the sweetest kind A puff of wind that dries the sweat The labor of a life’s beget I offer up my hand as perch A limb upon my tree of search ==================================== and you are me cadenced canary. Is utter silent listening? *shaking me head at your brilliance* *ww* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy you are a master of words and images. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, I couldn't agree with you more. Their song is so uplifting in the breeze. Again, enjoyed enjoyed another poetic song of yours. Sadelite |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and lovely Seymour. Thankyou for this. hugs,Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem sang right to my heart. ~ Make like the birdies and chirp the day away! How you manage to come up with so many wondrously unique themes on a daily basis is an indication of the magnitude of your creativity, mind, and talent, Sir Sonneteer! Good morning hugs! EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Although it is raining miserably here today, I hear at least one bird singing now! And he sings a melody so bright and sweet. ....jo |
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