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Symphony in Space
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Symphony in Space |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Thoughts spiraling like pages in the wind Sitting in Carnegie Hall listening acuity to DEBUSSY, Sonata for Violin And Piano Wondering bout Einstein’s, unfinished symphony Perceiving no limits or bounds of breathing space What confidence in validity, the inevitable artistry Imagine music in all its evenness, His premise Slopping curvatures of some period’s path being flexed A light weight celebrity taking miles of photographs Hush of nature, observes and smiles Tickling conscious into a dazzling network of thoughts Powerful and dense waves of sound Celestial quasars receiving signals from God Stellar shifting positions, reflecting off spheres Pulse passed echoes returned to earth’s nucleolus Splitting into multiple images in agreement His music was like a clock in space, pertinent Simply regaled in its place in Princeton Old nostalgia rather listening to reason How pleasant…tip toeing through thoughts Frequency shifting gamma rays, gravitational freedom Like hydrogen oscillating, traveling on its side, fluent Where I hear better and run faster, in a calculated waltz Splitting into pieces by theory of flaw Living thriving fields with an actual face Massive forces never to be contained And ultimate recalculations again and again Laser, maser, microwaves, cosmic drama Motion hop scotching eras Singing across some natural maze Accurately perceiving lighted highways Choral tones creating a wondrous music in space |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Listen and you will hear. Good morning dear. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, a harmony of peace or a cacophony of joy? you certainly "play" words well (Your words are your musical instruments that you use to describe what you are hearing. Joy can be boisterous, even noisy to passers by, cacophony is noise. Harmony has a peacefulness to it that is soothing. The sounds you hear can be both types and both types can invoke joy. You make the reader wish to hear exactly what fills you with such inspiration. That's the best that I can explain it, perhaps my words are not "playing" as well as yours.) Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Another beauty! That last verse, wow! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It is obvious through much of your poetry that you are a musician yourself. Enjoyed!  ....jo |
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