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deep blue forever |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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modern day traffic is full of heavy life that drags you in and pulls you out with breath-gasps that fly faster than gravity-driven falls cascading into rapid streams elsewhere, metronome sounds of the stethoscope sing du- -du-duh while sinusoids in oscilloscopes float meaningfully signs of life in the green woods, newborn birds tweet knowingly and sing songs for the kind wind who supports their sprouting wings somewhere else, a pair of five digits hang down an aimless rock to sink in floating lather and a pair of dreamy eyes seek grand pleasure from the great expanse of deep blue above and deep blue below somewhere else, far away in the distance the two deep blues unite luscious longing lips sealed in a forever kiss |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very interesting write here my smilin' friend. Keeping this in my library to read again and again. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
This is a rollercoaster, slow fast slow fast slow! I'm going back to ride on it again. Kaz |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"that drags you in and pulls you out with breath-gasps that fly faster than gravity-driven falls " Great lines. I liked the break from the fast pace to the deep blue expansiveness!  .....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very sensual write, Sudhir.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"somewhere else, far away in the distance the two deep blues unite luscious longing lips sealed in a forever kiss" ~ Oh, yes! Yes!! YES!!!  Good to read you again! Linda |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Aha, you were walking the streets of Bruxelles then. Very nice Sudhir, very nice indeed. My daughter and son in law are going to work in Bruxelles somewhere in October. They'll probably going to live in either Mechelen or Leuven. By then you and I will meet some day and have a drink at the big market square in Bruxelles my friend, I promise. Nice photo I must say. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such amazing contrasts... ending with one of the most precious moments of life... This is excellent! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ooooh, nice, my favorite stanza is the last one, too! Surely it is where the sky and the sea meet in their forever kiss. Am I right, that is what I see anyway. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Many thanks to all of you... and yes, it is where the sky and the sea meet  regards sudhir |
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