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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-06-14 12:56 PM

Lost in speechlessness,
you hold me captivated
in dreams-
that is where our eyes will meet
as the moonless night ensues.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-14 01:00 PM

Gorgeous, Paul! I'd been wondering where you were, and missing your beautiful writing.

......jo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-14 01:01 PM

Beautiful Paul...we've missed you.
Love your romantic words.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

3 posted 2004-06-14 01:04 PM

Thank you ~Jo, I was busy writing a speech. Its great to be back again....

~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-06-14 01:06 PM

Beautiful Paul...we've missed you.
Love your romantic words.
Hugs~

Awww, Thank you Nancy, It's good to see you once again ~P

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-06-14 01:55 PM

and in muted passings
we will drape our longings
over sleeping bodies
dreaming touches
warm under blankets
and sighs.

so very nice to see you Paul, you are missed so much when you are gone

hope its a longer stay this time?

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-06-14 02:43 PM

From Dawn:

and in muted passings
we will drape our longings
over sleeping bodies
dreaming touches
warm under blankets
and sighs.

~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~

Beneath muted skies
we cross the river of heaven
where our hearts join-
enfolded in warming sighs;
in the silent gaze of stars

returned

~P
so very nice to see you Paul, you are missed so much when you are gone
hope its a longer stay this time?

Thank you dear Dawn.

[This message has been edited by choshi (06-14-2004 05:26 PM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-06-14 03:23 PM

Beautiful poem!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-06-14 05:27 PM

Thank you JL

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2004-06-17 03:26 AM

lovely indeed

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-06-17 04:30 AM

Well written. I liked it very much. Very potent in few words.

Kevin

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

11 posted 2004-06-18 09:13 AM

choshi,
I love the hope in this. This is an amazing piece. It's great to read your poetry again!
Sadelite

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