Open Poetry #32 |
The forging of a Warrior |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A Warrior’s Kitae We all began as sand Satetsu Pulled from the breast of the earth Smelted in the womb of creation Blended Purified Tomahangane we become Raw and ready To pass through the Creator’s forge The fire is stoked The bellows blowing The breath of life is given As the master Smith prays for divine guidance And soul is worked into the core Flexible Bending Shingane becomes our heart But a softened heart Stands most vulnerable So we are worked Into a jacket of trial Creating strength to withstand the blows Heated Hammered Folded Kawangane is our armor And the armor and the core Are melded into one By the master Smith’s careful hands Shunning the base and the vile Which would weaken our metal Embracing the bond of purity Our beauty glowing Subtle Exquisite Jihada is our robe And thus are we formed A warrior in birth Once merely grains of sand ‘til we walked through the flames Of the Creator’s forge And we are reborn Strong Glorious The Samurai’s Sword S.A.T. I have read of the making of the Samurai's sword, the most skilled and amazing work of steel ever made.It is a long and difficult process, but the result is a sword of great beauty, spirituality, and strength.This is not so unlike what we go through in this life, ending, we hope, much like the Samurai's sword, strong, spiritual and beautiful. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
history has been known to tell tales of swords that sing and make beautiful music---i can hear there voices from the grave now applauding this effort! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captivating read and one I would like to revisit from time to time! Love & Light, Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, this was a phenominal piece of writing. I am very touched by it. May I send it to some friends?? ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! I forgot to save it! I'd forget my wings if they weren't attached! lol |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Marcel, I enjoyed your reply, thank you Jo, yes of course, I'm flattered. Linda, you so cute, forget your wings, thanks for the kind words Hugs to all -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
A Gr8 read Susan, I enjoyed this very much. I like poems that gives messages. |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Magnificent! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mr. AlleyCat and Gunslinger -- thank you. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i really enjoyed this poem ARCTIC WIND |
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