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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I've no desire to dredge memories long since settled or stir clouds of "what once was" yet were my lips to betray me and slip your name from the depths of a reckless dream I've nothing to fear only the walls would hear |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Much said within this well written verse. Smiles, TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yes...but I would know... oh wait...this is about me right?  you already know I love this...and I love how you are writing these days...yummy!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I hear ya! Intriguing write!  EA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ed darling poet man this is simply scrumptious, the Oh tapped within these lines is outstandingly expressed. I swear I can hear the ache within the unspoken sigh. As for the feelings that this conjures up in my soul it is awesome. YOU are an amazing writer and this is an exquisite example of your artistry. I love the phraseology in this, it is absolutely perfect as always Mushy   Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Like...me. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent write, my friend... Sometimes we just can't help those strolls down memory lane... even when each step pierces us with pain. Friends might say "don't go there"... but walls won't tattle. *S* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I really liked and enjoyed this  Tara |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
well you know i love it... *smiles* this is.. for lack of .. well i was going to say .. "better words" but you know what.. there is no other better word... this is yummy in all the right ways!!! :-) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
well, now that i breathe easier about this... you know it is so damned good, the emotion pierced to the bone my friend. I just love readin' your stuff  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I've no desire to dredge memories long since settled or stir clouds of "what once was" yet were my lips to betray me and slip your name from the depths of a reckless dream I've nothing to fear only the walls would hear" Loved this! The other night my husband said some words slipped from my lips....he said I was mumbling something and he asked if I was okay. I responded (still asleep I guess because I have no memory of this), "Yeah, I'm just trying to get the weeds out of my computer." Weird....our subconscious. ...jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dreams, like a good storm, aren't so frightening as much as they are something to contend with. As always, I enjoy reading your way with words, Edder~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's often said insincerely around here, but when I say it, it's for real...I do wish I had written this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
So sad, yet so understandable. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
this happens to often....... very good write |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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