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Rain Coming Down
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Rain Coming Down |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sun has gone away Slowly drifting away To tomorrow's dream Dreams that were meant to be, Rain coming down on my head, See no sun today, So it will be pouring down on me, Rain coming down on me, Rain coming down on me, Reminding me of the time, The time we had it all, But it seems that I didn't care, at all When you call upon me Rain that still coming down Sun has gone away, Soon, You will see rain, At the spring time, Summer's, Winter 's fall, Rain still will be coming down Rain coming down, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Hey, this would make a nice song... I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana I too think it would make a nice song. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVanDana~ And at the end of all the rain ... the sun, lighting a rainbow to grace your heart~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it always does...doesn't it? |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
so beautiful I love the rain! ~~**~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
vandana, this is very pretty; I enjoyed it Sadelite |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
rain can be soothing depending on how you see it...well done Victims....aren't we all? |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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