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Open Poetry #32

Morning Shower

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-06-15 12:36 PM

Morning Shower

bathing in sunlight
at my patio door
rinsing in the breeze
that cools my heels
and wraps my calves
breathing in the edge
of summer’s approach
what shall I drink
but the nectar
of the blossoms at hand
that stand
at the perimeter
of my living
and adorn
the quality of my life
with untold blessings
as they unfold
their true colors with glee

©June 15, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

1 posted 2004-06-15 12:37 PM

Oh! Welcome Summer! I liked this! I want to bath in the rain....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-06-15 12:44 PM

very refreshing!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-06-15 12:46 PM

nice.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-06-15 12:51 PM

but the nectar
of the blossoms at hand
that stand
at the perimeter
of my living
and adorn
the quality of my life
with untold blessings
as they unfold
their true colors with glee

outstanding, I saw a shadow standing there with fond admiration brushed across his face, which gives and improves quality of life...just to know we are loved.

Awesome write

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