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Sometimes, love is an ache that feels
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Sometimes, love is an ache that feels |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Sometimes, love is an ache that feels like air still waiting in a place of moss and fern, inveterate tree. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...well done. What beautiful inscription! TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, yes, so expressive and true, Martie.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A few words that say so much. Well done! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice -- Smiles -- Susan |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You even write small, well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I love this! Do some more! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
deep moist organic air filling with awareness life in tidal streams realization's need soaring clutch of love's sunlight deeply driven roots |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sometimes old habits are hard to break. Good one. To the point. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantastic Martie! M xx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Yes ... deeply rooted indeed~ Love you ... LOVE this title too~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Martie...love this! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Just so. I'll leave the rest unsaid. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great thought dear Martie! Stirring words, moving the air ... Love, Margherita  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I had to look it up....fits well.... excellent description....Now I are smart...caint you tail? |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
yep Martie - sometimes it feels that way but I never would have come up with such wonderful words to describe it - Paul |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
such truth is found in your words |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
feeling this....with such beauty ~~**~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... and sometimes it's simply an ache beyond description. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love is indeed such a design lovely write Martie, hope you had a gr8 weekend! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you wrote.... of potential.... smile that fertile heavy oh so heavy air... that knows how to make things happen awesome |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I picture that tree when I read this. I can see it now on a grassy bank. It leans a little toward the downhill side in a relaxed way, as if it were waiting for someone and not certain when they'll arrive. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And so it does.. Lovely Sandra |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Very potent message touches us in so few words. You crammed quite a bit of feeling into them. True to your wealth of talent, Martie. By the way, I loved the link you sent me. It was beautiful and incredibly touching. Thank you. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
fabulous Martie, invisioning the emerald green moist moss, which to me, has always, been so utterly beautiful, as are your words and heart. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!! Wonderfully put... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh big sigh |
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