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Open Poetry #32

She lies awake

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-06-15 12:48 PM

She lies still, but awake.
Day dreaming in the night.
"Only on life to live."
That was just her excuse.
But truth was in her tears.
She lies awake....
Regretting all

Ummmmmm..... I am trying to come up with a depressing charector......... I thought to put a morale in it lol.

Juju

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-15 12:55 PM

Juju, those first two lines are grabbers!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-06-15 12:45 PM

Yeah I think I will use them in my story. I will ignore the rest and refrase the regret all, I think any ways. Heh please excuse my not so intense poems. I just graduated and well Slight writers block, for poetry any ways lol...........

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