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Hummin' sounds
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Hummin' sounds |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Slow dancing, a'shuffling feet, soothing the soul, and time is replete, with slow dancing, a'swishing of skirt, hushing sounds that hearts won't be hurt, with slow dancing, now lean into me, my baby... my baby... ~*~ sing it again, but sing it to me, this slow dancing, it seems that to me, this slow dancing, is healing my heart, now hold me real close, and we'll surely start with slow dancing in nighttime's sweet air, slow dancing, with baby so fair... my baby... my baby... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh what a beautiful early morning read Karilea!! Yes!! I love this and I'm keeping it. When read aloud one could slow dance to the rhythm. Hugs YOU! Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully written... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Yep, I believe that would be heart healin'! Love your poem and title, Sunshine. Now I'll be humming all morning, trying to get this out of my head! It sticks! Great job! Sadelite |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You had me moving as if I were slow dancing as I read your rhythmic cadence and flow of images.  I'm sure your dance card is full!  Linda |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You had me doing the two-step. This is a great write. Thanks for sharing! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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