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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-06-15 04:44 PM

As if a different world...

We have dreamed to the borders
of the morning.

Nothing lingers past its moment.

We are here.

And the taste of night is quickly
fading from our lips....

                          Morning dew clings to a
                          blade.

                          Brief in its encounter.

                          Still...the day
                          continues.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (06-15-2004 05:56 PM).]

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-06-15 06:39 PM

You have such a way with eloquence and beauty.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-15 06:45 PM

WOW!! Wonderful write Eric!

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2004-06-15 06:50 PM

We have dreamed to the borders
of the morning.

I'm in love with that concept. library!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2004-06-15 07:25 PM

Beautiful..
Sandra

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-06-15 10:23 PM

"to the borders of morning, in a breath drawn full upon the fields of a waiting summer...Trepidation, the flask tipped skip to chase the afterglow of night, it's faded fantasy of light...
Still warm within and carried to the next of chance we meet

Inspiring write.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-06-16 12:11 PM

I really enjoy watching this different world unfold, Eric. Lovely.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-06-16 04:32 AM

yes...it does

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-06-16 04:52 AM

living each moment to its fullest...
Your writing gives pause; it is very pleasant to read.
Sadelite

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-06-16 06:55 AM

Ericc, I think this is the first one of yours where I see the parting...

still, a lingering home of
return...

come back soon.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2004-06-16 10:54 AM

I'm running out of ways to describe the effect your poetry has on me!

*smiles*

beautiful!

~Tier

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2004-06-16 12:35 PM

To be continued??

Nice one.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

12 posted 2004-06-16 02:12 PM

I remember you from my last time here. You're the one who writes about love in the way like I want to. Maybe some day I will.

Kaz

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