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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-06-13 09:43 PM





demon redux

choking back 10 years
found in 30 seconds of
no breath, stagnant memories
gripping today's skin
pulling me through the vortex
of ... hate
i fall
& the shell of you rapes
my security


©sdt'04

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-13 10:52 PM


Okay, here I am again, the first.  I tried not to be, but this is slipping down so I'm not going to let this go any further! lol  

Whoa.....painful write and I now exactly how this feel.  Well put!  Tell that ole bugar to leave our precious flower alone!     .....jo

Snow
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2 posted 2004-06-15 12:37 PM


i'm sorry you know this feeling.

...........i hope you know how much your support here means.

thank you.

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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