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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-06-13 08:57 AM


Pegged

I sit here when I can, wondering
as I often do, how your day is going
and if only we could share
our deepest thoughts to ease the battles.

Lightheadedness, tips me this way and that,
emotionless as I try to balance
and walk between these lines,
accepting what the day has to offer.

A round peg in a square hole, with a little space
surrounding me in warmth, my reason for being.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-06-13 09:18 AM


Maureen,
Your writing shows signs of change, enjoyed.

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-06-13 12:04 PM


Enjoyed --

Susan

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state of mind
3 posted 2004-06-13 12:20 PM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

The Jackal
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4 posted 2004-06-13 12:22 PM


Honesty personified.. enjoyed

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

JL
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5 posted 2004-06-14 05:06 PM


Very nice write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2004-06-14 05:11 PM


thank you all..I am just feeling a bit dizzy lately, thus the round peg in a square hole

M

iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-15 01:51 AM


Bless your heart, Maureen.....you are still able to write terrific poetry despite it all.   .....jo
Ericc
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8 posted 2004-06-15 04:33 PM


Excellent write!


Eric

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displaced
9 posted 2004-06-16 12:54 PM


*nodding*
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