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I would have left the light on longer
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I would have left the light on longer |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx 
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If I had known you would return…. I would have left the light on longer If I had known your heart was still mine… I would not have danced, I would not have chanced. I would not have lived like I did. The say “If you love someone then let them go, If they come back to you, then it was meant to be” to coin a phrase.. What if I did not know that you would return, How do I undo a promise A promise is a promise made… No matter where your heart stays. Isn’t it sad, to long for what you could have if you wanted to? Jennirey 2004 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Such a sad state to experience. Emotions well put to paper. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jennifer~ 'If I had known you would return…. I would have left the light on longer If I had known your heart was still mine… I would not have danced, I would not have chanced.' Oh my ... you will not know just what this means to me ... but thank you from the heart of my little bottom~  I've got a light to turn back on~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thats the secret...to know when to hold on and when to let go...and when to turn out the light...James |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i feel this, and been there once or twice. good write bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Very powerful words and such a sad, frustrating position well conveyed. I understand well your present state. How many times was I left by the wayside by one that I thought I loved, then when I find another who apreciates me, they roll right back in. It worked once. But then later still failed. If they love you they understand you are human, filled with emotions and not dependent upon the unknown. You should not have to answer to anyone, including yourself, the errors of love when not committed to another. Shame on them for leaving questions unanswered. Hold your head high, say this is who I am, take it or leave it, but make your decision. And, have no regrets. There are many pining after a good hearted woman. Please know you have done nothing wrong. You write beautifully. Very talented little masterpiece up at the top of these replies. I look forward to reading more from you. Sorry for the long reply. Warm regards to you my fellow Texan, Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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