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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Hide me I have taken to hiding in your words, pulling them over me, burying my face in their clever, which smells much like clover; soaking in sounds of heart-beating absolution as you tend my lost senses. The inking think of you, more indelible upon my skin than blood or bonds… even when you believe your own sounds feel too frail for my ear, inherently speaking my own fears, we draw yet one more step closer, as we grant this inner haven and shadows close around this love. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-11-2004 11:33 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I have taken to hiding in your words, pulling them over me, bury my face in their clever, which smells much like clover; soaking in sounds of heart-beating absolution as you tend my lost senses." WOW and WOW again!! This is exquisite and powerful writing Karilea. The visions and sounds make the senses come alive.. Oooh I love it....keeping it for sure. ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow, this is such an amazing peice of writing, thanks for sharing  Andrew |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sunshine, good Morning I swear, your writing is maticulous and lovely, I believe you are one of the best I have read....amazingly bittersweet, thank you for sharing. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Big Hugs Karilea !! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh this is soooo snuggly nice |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Excellent poem, Karilea. What a picture you have painted for us! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The inking think of you, more indelible upon my skin than blood or bonds… Oh, yes... it is this. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and this is sooooo going into my library. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"The inking think of you, more indelible upon my skin than blood or bonds… even when you believe your own sounds feel too frail for my ear, inherently speaking my own fears," What an exquisite expression of sensitivity....and I feel the truth of it.  ....jo |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is so beautiful Sunshine, beyond words. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Indeed it is. Very beautifully done, Karilea! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was a very pretty put together presentation dear lady. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Kari, this is perfect. And thanks for the welcome home. I missed you all. Sandra |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
pleasure to read this fine day |
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