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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lost I ghost my wings as hard I could And lost the sight of common good Flew so high within the sky I could not hear the common cry I lost myself within refrain On highways of a higher plain And drifted into mystery A dominion of sophistry I missed my train by my abide The masses and the classes ride Shunned the common grain of field the Agony and ecstasies yield Placed the hood of passive dark Stasis of the cry of hark Found the Braille of silent night Lost the sight of sun and light And I was humbled back to dawn To the common where I was born |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir T! You shall never be just a common man to me! "Found the Braille of silent night" ~ That line is sheer brilliance!  Sip the nectar of the gods, for ye be one in the eyes of your fellow PiPsters! God loves you, and so do we!  EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And drifted into mystery A dominion of sophistry I missed my train by my abide The masses and the classes ride Shunned the common grain of field the Agony and ecstasies yield Placed the hood of passive dark Stasis of the cry of hark Found the Braille of silent night Lost the sight of sun and light And I was humbled back to dawn To the common where I was born ================================ aint no such thing as a common poet or dragon.  *L*And drifted into mystery A dominion of sophistry can your couplets be any cooler??? and then there is this line.... Found the Braille of silent night my oh my...you are poetry in motion.  *ww*   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful use of words in this poem Sy. You rock!. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful morning read once again Sy! Very much enjoyed. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Placed the hood of passive dark Stasis of the cry of hark Found the Braille of silent night Lost the sight of sun and light ~*~ Now, that's lost. Been feeling a bit that way myself, lately. Wonder if its the weather? Let's pour some tea, and contemplate...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The entire penning layered in the depths of your wonderful poetic thoughts~ THIS - 'Found the Braille of silent night' Uh, huh ... soooooooooooo marvelous~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
can't much add to those above me... you are the king of Rhythm and rhyme M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we always return |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, If Angels can make points, you made some with me. LOL JM, So nice to see you posting I know you had some bad weather, saw it on the telli. Think about you all the time. WWRS scorpio Thanks for the comp my friend. Nancy, Thanks for the wonderful. Hugs Sunshine Pouring tea suits me. Marge, Thank you sweety, Hugs back. Maureen, You are a dear. Hugs passing, What would I do without you. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sy, as always utterly amazing...your rhyming scheme was remarkable, but then again it always is! this was truly brilliant writing. Take care my friend. Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amy, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Placed the hood of passive dark Stasis of the cry of hark Found the Braille of silent night Lost the sight of sun and light I never fail to find brilliance and beauty blended in your words... This is excellent!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern, You are a dear, thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I found this to be quite an uncommon poem with great value. .....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you so much. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting read, this, thoughtful. Enjoyed. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
He wandered through the morning mist to find that which he did insist would come to him as a graille with wisdom writ in golden braille For all the night shall come to day and day shall cast each ghost astray And then this host shall once more lead upon a saddled and bridled steed. Well said sir Sy....thanx |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Thank you so much. Barry, You are a friend, thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I'm glad to see this at the top I must have missed its time of drop as always you are wonderful like sweet corn fresh from the hull |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so good, it makes me wonder why I have been absent so long. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Now that is a sweet coment, thank you dear. |
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