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Open Poetry #32

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IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-06-12 06:25 PM

And we turned to the moon, unrecognized
one word spilling

you hesistated when reaching hide tide,
unlovingly, I was stopped by inertia

I whispered to you.
"What is it?"
"A sign, a premonition." you shudder again

I can do nothing but soothe you
with my own disease

"Of what, though?"
"I am unsure."

As you always were.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-06-12 06:31 PM

Sometimes it feels just like that...
not knowing if one is enough
and the premonition that we've already
spoken the truth.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-12 06:41 PM

Very good conveyance of those feelings in so few words -- I liked the way you did this in conersation style.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2004-06-12 06:47 PM

Interesting, and very emotionally expressive.
Sandra

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