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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-06-10 11:08 PM

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2004-06-11 12:03 PM

if "a word fitly spoken is like apples of gold in pictures of silver", then I suppose your definition of words spoken roughly or harshly or impolitely would aptly be "smog chasers"...excellent thought and good write...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-06-11 12:06 PM

Yup, everyone in southern California needs a good smog chaser.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2004-06-11 01:08 AM

"I suppose your definition of words spoken roughly or harshly or impolitely would aptly be "smog chasers"..."

although i like to see the different takes people get from my work, sometimes, i do feel a slight pull to come back and try to lead you in the direction i intended ....this was a very gently "spoken" piece of work...filled with love for the person who lifted the smog from a very dark day. probably one of my more simple pieces. :-D

thanks so much for the feedback.. it's always very appreciated.

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-06-11 01:27 AM

I wish I had a smog chaser right now! Beautiful, as always, sweet Snow.

...jo

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-06-11 01:37 AM

jo... if you need one, then i hope one comes your way very soon.

thank you so much for the comment.

hugs..
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2004-06-11 01:50 AM

thanks for the correction, Snow, I think I read this one while drifting off to slumberland...it is perfectly clear now...as Roseanne Adanana would say...never mind!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-06-11 07:47 AM

very lovely and interesting...enjoyed your positive insight

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

8 posted 2004-06-11 09:57 AM

Great writing

Andrew

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

9 posted 2004-06-11 10:10 PM

we all need a voice sometimes.

:-}

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