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Conus Aplustre
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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beneath stones a shell rouge and gray banded erosion-rough touch time-etched whorls spiral eyes in esrever hint of lilac curl invites touch to curve swim intertidal surges |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
http://www.capricornica.com/Aust_shells/Conidae/con_aplu.htm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne You have written it perfectly lovely! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely wonderful Corinne, thanks for the link  Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
spiral eyes in esrever I did not know the word "esrever" so I looked it up. Guess what.....duh.... I figured it out! Fun poem in all ways! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
beneath stones a shell rouge and gray banded time-etched whorls hint of lilac curl swim ~*~ Yes...as do words... I'm truly sorry I lost so much time in reading you, in the beginning... I think it's time to play some serious catchup! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Always ... always ... you word-teach~ Reminded me of an oldie that I 'may' repost for you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very creative write, Corinne. Enjoyed the playful word play. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
really enjoyed this! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you Martie! Thanks Maree! Hi Iliana! Yeah, dirty trick, huh? Thanks!Sunshine - awww, you are too good to me! Thanks for the ego boost, lady! Hey Marge - bring it on, I'd love to see it! Thanks Midnite! Passingshadows - thanks! Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
hint of lilac curl invites touch to curve ... and this write keeps inviting the reader to feel the read... and read the feel... thanks ... regards sudhir |
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