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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2004-06-09 06:22 AM

crumbs of fragmented emote
were left behind as if sweat,
discarded

dismissing the heat
as a futile tick
of summer insanity

is all very quiet now

hordes of lunatics
that raged within the graffiti
have been disarmed
to walk separate ways

beyond the widowed drapes
Lemon-tree Luna
sprinkles silverdust
on narrow grainy streets

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-06-09 08:52 AM

beyond the widowed drapes
Lemon-tree Luna
sprinkles silverdust
on narrow grainy streets

~*~

I like being on your inside
looking outside...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-06-09 09:05 AM

Sudhir,
Good mood write, enjoyed.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-06-09 09:05 AM

Your imagery is impeccable...fantastic write m'friend.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-06-09 02:18 PM

Intense writing....great job.

Eric

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-06-09 02:45 PM

Yet another very interesting write my smilin' friend. Enjoyed! Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-06-09 02:53 PM

nice

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2004-06-09 03:02 PM

"crumbs of fragmented emote
were left behind as if sweat,
discarded"

nicely done my friend.. from reading your posts of late..I see you continue to grow as a writer..and in each..I see new.. in each I see something to enjoy...

always a pleasure to read you sir..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-06-09 03:06 PM

Enjoyed very much --

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-06-09 03:09 PM

Lovely write!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2004-06-10 02:11 PM

you are all just incredible... Thanks for being the reason I smile now and again... like now, for instance

regards
sudhir

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