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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-06-08 10:19 PM




You were here long before my arrival,
but I travel within the footprints
you so carefully left behind.
On days when I’ve been lost
and stepped on rocks instead of sand,
you’ve somehow found a way to reach out
and offer me a guiding hand.
You are within and without the hidden core
the porous surfaces of me,
and when I’m blinded by
my human stupidity and insanity,
you exhale fresh air in front for me to breathe,
offer healing sunshine that warms the cold of me.
In every living creature you make me understand
there is something far greater than what I can see.
You overlook my myopic vision of the universe
and forgive me even when I pretend
not to feel your words in my heart.
You are the One,
the source of all being
the beginning and the end
and everything in between.

I know you not,
yet I trust you.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-08-2004 11:55 PM).]

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Kevo
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1 posted 2004-06-09 12:12 PM


Too often we fail to recognize and appreciate the things we take for granted...and forget to thank the One who gave it all to us.  I am as guilty as the next.  Thank you for reminding me to say thank you again.  This was a superb poem with the grandest inspiration of all.

Your poetic friend,

Kevin


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2 posted 2004-06-09 12:16 PM


Well said!

Thank you.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-06-09 01:12 AM


Like this...James
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4 posted 2004-06-09 02:41 AM


"You are the One,
the source of all being
the beginning and the end
and everything in between.

I know you not,
yet I trust you."

How could we possibly ever "know" the All that is All -- I'm with you on this one.  Sometimes, I'm so overwhelmed with the little wonders around me, I cannot express it.  You did such a beautiful job of doing that!   .......jo

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5 posted 2004-06-09 03:52 AM


you write of faith so beautifully....
Martie
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6 posted 2004-06-09 12:24 PM


Midnite

Inspired writing!  

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2004-06-09 01:22 PM


What Martie said...

Inspired writing...

regards
sudhir

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8 posted 2004-06-09 02:14 PM


Yes...inspired.

Eric

Jaime Fradera
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9 posted 2004-06-09 09:04 PM


We are One, after all,
You and I.
Did I tell you
My favorite number is six?
That I decided this when I was seven?
And how one night,
At sunset,
I turned on the kitchen light
To keep the birdies from going to sleep …
But that they went to sleep anyway?
:---)
The Southern Cross

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10 posted 2004-06-09 09:45 PM


An affirmation of wisdom and beauty-- soon tobe shelved in library!  THANK YOU, Midnitesun; this is absolutely beautiful!

    ~Sadelite~

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11 posted 2004-06-09 09:49 PM


Very beautiful Kacy,  much wisdom and
encouraging words within.  Thank You.

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