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Open Poetry #32

Something Bout Judgement

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-06-08 06:36 AM

Amulet stone density
Plucking light froze in her mind
In a hurricane lantern reality
Through a world of white pillars
As planets ad-lib
With strong smooth muscles
About a judgment & its penalties
She can neither straighten
Or scratch canyons to find
That enforced kind of dilemma
But she knows like an
Involuntary reflex
Her high-ended inexperience
Stickler for his health
Martyrs finish last
When septic blame incisions eyesight
A stealth fully forged within spores

Stumbling up steps
He is drunk again
Like headlights in the rain
Words appear in a book
That he hasn’t yet read
While giving sermons of
Precise with nothing inside
Considerations are not his focus

The war within sentences his moments
Free range entrepreneur steals indecency
By choice, the centerfold furnishes love
Perhaps quit impeached, perhaps not
It is best to allow a painter’s syntax

With emptiness and daydreams I close my eyes
Hoping he might locate his mother’s good mornings

7
Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 113
Amherst, MA, USA

1 posted 2004-06-08 07:36 PM

wow.

so many stunning phrases i can't begin to list them.

nice work.

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no i will NOT wait three seconds!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-09 02:56 AM

I hope he can encounter those, as well, for his mother's sake, as much as his.

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2004-06-09 05:29 AM

wow...what an incredible write
very touching

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