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0 posted 2004-06-08 02:05 PM





© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2004-06-08 02:52 PM


Beautiful words, and view!

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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2 posted 2004-06-08 03:01 PM


you most defintely sound like you are ready to fly...

"The art of flying is to forget to land..." as partially remembered from 'The hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy'  

Regards
Sudhir

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3 posted 2004-06-08 03:04 PM


wonderfully uplifting...ha...play on words there...smiles and hugs
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4 posted 2004-06-08 03:10 PM


Yes, yes -- spread those wings!

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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5 posted 2004-06-08 03:30 PM


Now if this were the 70's, I'd be quite afraid of your meaning here, but I have hope and your affirmation that you are speaking figuratively and poetically.

Time to SOAR!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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6 posted 2004-06-08 03:34 PM



Don't forget the 'chute...

iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-08 04:12 PM


W O W ! ! !  Can I join you?! ! !
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8 posted 2004-06-08 04:37 PM




Very very special Dawn...love this!

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2004-06-08 05:35 PM


FLY BABY FLY!

You go girl.

you're an amazing lady yanno that?



Maree.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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10 posted 2004-06-08 05:49 PM


OH, exceptional! Me too!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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11 posted 2004-06-08 06:59 PM


you should be writing for one of those companies that writes inspirational messages.
This one should be in a frame over some CEO's computer. (I meant that as a compliment)
Collen

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12 posted 2004-06-08 09:13 PM


me personally? not without a freakin jetpack. fly on muted (admiring your tail...er feathers..what? i said tailfeathers..oh blame the fever phbllt)
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13 posted 2004-06-09 01:57 AM


WHOO HOOO YEAHHHHHHHHHH .... errr i think i will wait for my wings to grow before i leap but in the mean time i will stand here and take piccys of you soaring

Very cool piece of poetry there buddy, not to mention awsome photo.

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14 posted 2004-06-09 05:28 AM


so beautifully you
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