Open Poetry #32 |
Beyond All Love |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beyond All Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ Beyond all love, I have held you in treasured moments of this heart Walked with you, talked with you whether together … or apart~ I have held you in the tender as twi-of-night purpled in soft come Stroked your brow with gentle kisses as the day became undone~ Caressed you in the velvet of night while the stars watched in amaze As you returned the love more abundant than what I gave~ I have loved you with a fervor that glistened on my skin knowing … growing a beginning that has no end~ Foreverly circles us back to the place we will always be Me loving you … You loving me~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and may it always be... Loverly, loverly, loverly! Lovin' hugs, EO |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beyond all love, I have held you in treasured moments of this heart Walked with you, talked with you whether together … or apart~ Oh, lady... this is so lovely. *S* And yes... I know all about those conversations of heart... they're vital to survival when distance is an enemy. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Foreverly circles us back to the place we will always be Me loving you … You loving me~" So very loverly Margie gal! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Lovely. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Loverly my friend. Hugs a comin your way. BonBon |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!! I absolutely love it...The perfect circle is love... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...silky...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis I love how your words love! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such happiness is a treasure few know... This write seemed holy somehow. TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for letting me share with you the tenderness of my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is exquisite! How wonderful to have your love returned, as it is! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoy! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Caressed you in the velvet of night while the stars watched in amaze As you returned the love more abundant than what I gave~" Yes -- beyond all love! Really enjoyed this, sweet Marge! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in awe at you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it is wonderful to be loved like that, Marge M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beyond all love, I have held you in treasured moments of this heart Walked with you, talked with you whether together … or apart~ Beautifully written and expressed Margie My best for a fabulous day |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Wonderful ~~~*Marge*~~~ It is true You Love me and I love You Huglet's Muys [This message has been edited by Muys (06-08-2004 08:04 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Soooooo nice! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very lurvly indeed regards sudhir |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is the most beautiful love poem. I was going to quote my favorite part, but it wopuld have been the whole poem. It all is the way my Honey and I feel about each other, too. It is special to have this kind of love in your life, isn't it? Thanks for sharing your heart with us. Hugs, Ethel |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
~Me loving you … You loving me~ I know that, sister to my heart, but this poem wasn't about me, now was it. Say hello to Bill and tell him that I said that he's a darn lucky fellow. And that I'm still looking for that elephant Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such beautiful words of love, Marge. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...love it...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya and Good Morning, very lovely write, have a great day |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
breathtaking Marge. Perfection as usual hon! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Again, I thank EACH of you for your lovely replies to this little write~ Muys & Titia ... LOVE YOU BOTH SO DEARLY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful Marge. Love ya, Betty |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully and tenderly expressed, Marge! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
love how you write romance |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks gals~ And the neatest thing is that my fella just loves it too~ I appreciate the sweet replies~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...This has got to be one of the best if not the best poem of yours I have read. It is sure to touch many hearts in a special way...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* simply beautiful |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
An awful lot of heart, of feelings and of love within this poem. Much enjoyed, Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Smiling broadly here ... thank you dear people for your responses~ Paul~ That is such a nice reply ... thanking you twice~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just 'on accounta'~ Some days are real special~ Love you, Bill~ *Huglets* ~*Me*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I needed to read this tonight. ~Sending heart hugs your way dear lady~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
re- read this over and over ARCTIC WIND |
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