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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-07-02 05:37 PM

You've colored me in shades of jade,
   outside the line.

The variegated colors played
   tricks each and every time.

You made me think,
   maybe you were the crayon?

Whitewashed canvas again,
   a blank sheet ready for prime.

Who would have thought
   you’d visit my crayola box?

Who would have guessed
   you were a rhyme sublime?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-07-02 05:41 PM

I think you've drawn a rainbow here!!

You've colored me in shades of jade,
outside the line.

So pretty Kacy~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-02 06:18 PM

Now, this is a very interesting piece....can't wait for the next installment. I hope there's more 'cuz I really liked this.

....jo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-07-02 06:22 PM

Very much enjoyed this Kacy..
I have a feeling there is more to tell....
Please do.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2004-07-02 07:22 PM

Nice. Got room for some water color? Or better yet some finger paint. Or is that part of the other installments coming?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-07-02 07:54 PM

Oh, I'm granting that person a box
of 64...

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2004-07-02 08:06 PM

Excellent. Very much enjoyed.

Patricia

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-07-02 08:07 PM

Yes, I think 64 might be the number needed.
Enjoyed this Kacy, an interesting write.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2004-07-02 08:28 PM

"Who would have thought
   you’d visit my crayola box?

Who would have guessed
   you were a rhyme sublime?"

Yanno Kacy?  Think I got another one for ya.  You're now the poetic version of Ben & Jerry's.  And I'll have one of those little spoonfuls of each word...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2004-07-03 12:36 PM

LOL. I enjoyed all these replies.

But Duncan? You have me falling outta my chair!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-07-03 01:29 PM

better than what I was thinking at the first sight of the title!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-07-03 01:33 PM

I love your use of colour in this word painting!

Happy holiday hugs,
Linda

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-07-03 03:04 PM

Color me a smile

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

13 posted 2004-07-03 10:51 PM

I'm always pleased to read those who hear what I cannot. Nicely done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2004-07-06 02:51 AM

Dixie, Susan, Linda, Ken

THANK YOU!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2007-11-11 12:55 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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