Open Poetry #32 |
sand and you |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
sand and you the barest contrast of sand and skin I can’t say where it stops and you begin do you? does it? shimmers of heat from sand and you the same golden warmth mounding beneath my hands yes, this is how... you’re softer |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed A dear comparison of soft and glisten. Loved it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh how warm this is!! Well done. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like these shadings of light... Well done, Sir. Puts me in mind of one of my favorite poets. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! ! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
shimmers of heat from sand and you You see in ways we can only envy... you write in ways that make us strive to see more. *S* Beautiful write!!! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Heh, nice sensual image there. Well done. CG |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*grin* softly said...I love the way you wrote this poem... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Aha...one touch and you figured it out...yes women are softer...it always pleases me...James |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
...though sometimes they can slip thru your fingers... ...quicker than the sand... CG |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely comparison! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good poem, Ed. It has a tenderness about it. Hugs, Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Very tender... I like! Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, if it doesn't her, it does me As always a pleasure reading you |
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