Open Poetry #32 |
Corner Drug Store |
Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Corner Drug Store the cops beat up another dope dealer today sympathy was a tall lanky dude who hid around the corner and justice was a short blind guy who could care less what he may have seen. *** ©2004 Grover Gall |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey Grove?!!! You are a master at these! This was really excellent. TD |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
That was cool. I enjoyed it. Very interesting. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Ooooooh Yeeeah! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
interesting and thought provoking write Grover, but would I expect less than that from you? Enjoyed, as always. ~Sadie~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
interesting, i like this London ON eh? Go Knights! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So sad but so true and it gets worse it seems......Good write! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Nice little poem, Grover. And appreciated by someone in the justice system. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Appreciated! Not caring is dangerous and still it's true, it's not easy to get involved, even in the name of justice. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Grover, there you go again.... saying much in a few words!! Excellent writing. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
When I seen the title the first thought was of the corner drug store of my childhood. My friend and I would run filled with laughter because we knew we would receive free water at the soda fountain. Or sitting behind the door reading comic books without fear. Your corner drug store is no longer filled with innocence and beauty. What a shame. Bon-Bon |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow Grover...great write! Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Interesting write here, Grover -- liked your metaphors. ....jo |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thought provoking and sad |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great to hear from you. ive missed you |
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