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Open Poetry #32

Men of Mars.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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0 posted 2004-06-01 05:51 PM

Men of Mars. 22/05/04

Three crimson chariots of war
rise above the dawn horizon
brandishing gleaming swords
and spears of Poseidon’s armoury,
lips pursed to horns that rise
above the deathly clamour,
the clashing armies part in silent awe.

Hmm...

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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1 posted 2004-06-01 08:11 PM

Verg good writing! (I'll watch for them.....hmmmmmmmmm).

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-06-02 01:57 AM

well done

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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3 posted 2004-06-06 08:53 PM

there is a quality to good poetry that you just know it when it reads right...and this one does...great job...

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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4 posted 2004-06-08 11:00 AM

Thanks for the replies it really means a lot to me.

Andrew

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