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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-06-05 06:25 PM




Do you remember the first time
That you fell deeply into love
When life was picture perfect
How you fit like hand in glove

Do you remember how he held you
Safe and warm in his embrace
How you made sweet love for hours
As you gazed up at his face

Do you remember his first kiss
As fireworks lit the sky
When he told you that he loved you
And you felt like you could fly

Remember walking along the shore
On a balmy Summer's night
As a passionate kiss ensued
Beneath the pale moonlight

He found the key to your heart
And you welcomed him in
It didn't take long at all
For true love to begin

Your feet still leave the ground
When you feel his tender kiss
He is all you ever dreamed of
Memories are made of this

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-05 07:11 PM


Sue, this brought back so many memories.  Beautiful write.   ........jo
jwesley
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2 posted 2004-06-05 07:55 PM


Well, for me it was "she" but other than that - yes indeed.  Well done me friend.

jwesley

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3 posted 2004-06-05 11:54 PM


Do you remember how he held you
Safe and warm in his embrace
How you made sweet love for hours
As you gazed up at his face

Yes.....yes I do.
hugs,Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-06-06 03:28 AM


indeed they are
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2004-06-06 11:35 AM



~ and may you be making such memories today for your tomorrows!

Absolutely loverly, Sensuous Sue!

With much affection,
Linda


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6 posted 2004-06-06 12:14 PM


Hi Sue  
Sweet memories, huh? Love the poem and the picture.
Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2004-06-07 03:06 PM


I started selecting verses I particularly liked... and added... and added... and finally realized I wasn't leaving anything unrepeated! LOL

Yes... they are... and thank heavens for them! *S*

CastleGuard
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8 posted 2004-06-07 06:18 PM



Beautifully done, Sue.

Brings back memories of a mirrored image...

CG

Startime55
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9 posted 2004-06-07 06:24 PM


*sigh* such sweet memories are ones of love given in just this way...You have given pure vision to the sweetness love holds...wonderful writing...
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10 posted 2004-06-07 07:06 PM


I love this Such wonderful memories and emotions!  I'm keeping this one!  When I feel down I can read and remember

Tara

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2004-06-07 07:08 PM


Yes they are...sweet memories...James
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