Open Poetry #32 |
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Memories Are Made Of This |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Do you remember the first time That you fell deeply into love When life was picture perfect How you fit like hand in glove Do you remember how he held you Safe and warm in his embrace How you made sweet love for hours As you gazed up at his face Do you remember his first kiss As fireworks lit the sky When he told you that he loved you And you felt like you could fly Remember walking along the shore On a balmy Summer's night As a passionate kiss ensued Beneath the pale moonlight He found the key to your heart And you welcomed him in It didn't take long at all For true love to begin Your feet still leave the ground When you feel his tender kiss He is all you ever dreamed of Memories are made of this I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue, this brought back so many memories. Beautiful write. ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, for me it was "she" but other than that - yes indeed. Well done me friend. jwesley |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Do you remember how he held you Safe and warm in his embrace How you made sweet love for hours As you gazed up at his face Yes.....yes I do. hugs,Chris ![]() Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed they are ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and may you be making such memories today for your tomorrows! Absolutely loverly, Sensuous Sue! With much affection, Linda |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue ![]() Sweet memories, huh? Love the poem and the picture. Hugs, Ethel |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I started selecting verses I particularly liked... and added... and added... and finally realized I wasn't leaving anything unrepeated! LOL Yes... they are... and thank heavens for them! *S* |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautifully done, Sue. Brings back memories of a mirrored image... CG |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* such sweet memories are ones of love given in just this way...You have given pure vision to the sweetness love holds...wonderful writing... |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I love this ![]() ![]() Tara |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes they are...sweet memories...James |
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